MbShea@PWP@English@UMCP

Beginning: Start with the definition of gendercide. Hook the reader with examples of the practice. Convince the reader that gendercide is a serious problem.

Middle: I will elaborate on the cause and effect of the problem in China and India. Then, I will relate the problem to social sustainability and sustainability as a whole.

End: Introduce some possible solutions while mainly highlighting the problem needs a solution. Summarize the cause and effects of gendercide and gendercide's part in sustainability.

LOGOS: data on the demographic effects of gendercide; data on the economic and costs of gendercide

PATHOS: plenty of disturbing practices and statistics; some stories about the practices and effects of gendercide

ETHOS: credibility from well-educated doctors, professors, and lawyers who have interest in social justice, demographics, and family law; experts on China and India

STRUCTURE: I will use the typical essay format. It will have a 'lemon' structure with greater detail in the middle of the paper.

GOAL: inform the audience of gendercide and its relation to sustainability.

G, I would also call this a self-study document for your exploration of a very complex problem we are facing.

Did you shift a bit from carrot to lemon? What they have in common is that sense of trailing off, after the very important and complex information earlier.

I think that sections heads could help you keep this in control.

Also, can you find population pyramid visuals to show this sex ration imbalance?

Just FYI: England and France had stunning sex ration imbalances after WWI and WWII, but this was loss of men in marriage/reproduction ages.