MbShea@PWP@English@UMCP

Beginning: I will start with defining a concussion and talking about the widespread effects it can have on one's life.

Middle: I will provide a summary of the history of concussion treatments. Touching on how they were treated and are treated as well as current research on how to better treat them.

End: Information about how to treat a concussion and warning signs to watch for.

Logos: Providing a curated list of additional resources for information on concussions.

Pathos: an anecdote about my personal experience with a concussion after a car crash and recommendations for treatment based on my experience.

Ethos: Information about concussion research from reputable research institutions.

Structure: my paper will have 6 parts:
1. Definition and personal anecdote
2. History of treatment
3. Diagnosis criteria
4. Things to avoid
5. Treatment
6. Additional resources

Goal: Inform people on concussions and how to properly manage them.

Good section heading names. For additional resources, I would help your reader sort through the better web-based resources. Help them consult with Dr. Google.

I see that TED contains many helpful resources. Here is a good definition one.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xvjK-4NXRsM