FINAL PROJECT: Abstract and Reader's Reponse > Quantum Mechanics in Life
Life Sciences? Seems better than Life.
Have you started? What are your section headings? Look to write NOW, so that you can revise and polish this document.
Have you started? What are your section headings? Look to write NOW, so that you can revise and polish this document.
December 10, 2015 |
Marybeth Shea
Reader’s Profile: I am going to imagine a reader in the liberal arts who isn’t interested in the sciences and is completely unfamiliar with biological and quantum mechanical concepts.
Reader’s response: Your abstract is limited to discussions of the sciences themselves, but I am sure that there are related societal and environmental consequences that could also be discussed. Doing so would expand the range of topics that your paper could mention and expand its appeal. Also including some information about why these intersections matter to people not studying them would also help to broaden the appeal of this article.