MbShea@PWP@English@UMCP

ABSTRACT: Periodontitis and tooth caries are caused by a build up of bacteria and sugars, which causes the formation of acid. This acid causes tooth decay, and bacteria build up also causes periodontal diseases (gum diseases). For several decades, patients have been taught the importance and necessary actions that need to be taken to prevent the development of periodontitis and tooth caries. One of the most important preventative actions that one needs to perform is daily flossing. However, there has been recent developments and research that is proposing that flossing is not necessary. Statistically, there is research from the National Institute of Health that demonstrates that flossing is highly effective in preventing periodontitis and tooth caries, but clinically, the research shows that flossing does indeed prevent these oral hygiene issues, but not to the extent as previously thought. Because of this research, there has been speculation by patients about the importance of flossing. In opposition to this research, many dentists are continuing to strongly advocate for the need and importance of flossing to promote good oral hygiene. There has been research done regarding the effects of flossing oral hygiene, but not enough has been done to truly show that flossing is not necessary. There is still great value in the opinions of the trained and educated dentists who advocate for flossing.

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READER’S PROFILE: I imagine a reader that may be convinced by the research that is showing the flossing should not be a necessity.

READER’S RESPONSE: I think that even though the author is concluding in his abstract that flossing should still be a necessary precaution taken to prevent periodontitis and tooth caries, should I still use up my time by flossing when there is research that shows that flossing is not as effective as it was previously thought to be? The author also points out that there hasn’t been much extensive research on this issue, but to be honest, how much research can be done and is needed to prove the value of flossing on this?

S, good plan. Will you have trouble filling the 7-10 page requirement? If so, you could consider including guidance on how to floss. Further, you can also describe products for this task, as well.

Let me know how this is going, so you can use these additional topics, if needed.

Can you also give guidance to the better patient sources on the web about dental hygiene?