FINAL PROJECT: Abstract and Reader's Reponse > Popular Workout and Energy Supplements and Their Biochemical Effects on the Body
E, you may want to rethink the third person approach, as well as the formalism. Think about how to reach tired, bored, seniors with spring fever.
Will you use other ways to accommodate to this audience? In the curriculum guide you might include a YouTube commercial for a performance-enhancing project and help students evaluate the claims.
What about cartoons or animations?
Let me know more detail about HOW you will provide this excellent content for AP chemistry/biology students.
Will you use other ways to accommodate to this audience? In the curriculum guide you might include a YouTube commercial for a performance-enhancing project and help students evaluate the claims.
What about cartoons or animations?
Let me know more detail about HOW you will provide this excellent content for AP chemistry/biology students.
May 7, 2017 |
Marybeth Shea
Reader Profile: A student in AP chemistry or biology who is assigned to read this paper during class after AP exams.
Reader Response: There is a lot of information - perhaps too much - and there is not enough transition between some sections. However, the information about caffeine and creatine were very informative for me. These are my two most used supplements and I did not have much prior knowledge of how they work or any details on safety. However, the other supplements do not really apply to what I'm looking for and are relatively unimportant to me.
Voice: It will be third person throughout the paper.
Citation: It will be in text citations throughout the paper.