FINAL PROJECT: Abstract and Reader's Reponse > The Invincible Youth
I would call this a guide that informs.
Also, your title does not help the reader see what your guide contains.
Make sure that you include the several new programs on campus that help DACA students. Search on UMD home page to find them. Several of them also involve the campus ministry offices. Ask me about this. Is hidden but there.
Also, your title does not help the reader see what your guide contains.
Make sure that you include the several new programs on campus that help DACA students. Search on UMD home page to find them. Several of them also involve the campus ministry offices. Ask me about this. Is hidden but there.
December 10, 2017 |
Marybeth Shea
Reader’s Response:
This is an informative article but I don’t plan on helping individuals who entered this country illegally. The introduction to your guide was not compelling for me at all. You might want to try a different route next time, maybe use statics. Statistics about impact of DACA beneficiaries on the economy might persuade me a little more to help out. Also, you should elaborate more on why DACA was seen as unconstitutional. There was a reason why it was rescinded. Lastly, ease up on the DACA recipient anecdotes.