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and style.  Short paragraphs are evidence that you, the writer, does the heavy lifting for the reader. Why? Please consider paragraphing as an ethical duty to your reader.  At the very least, think about manners and consideration.


Here is an exercise in sentence-to-sentence coherence.  Work your way through this web exhibit, including the links. Read more about working on paragraph coherence strategies at OWL.


For some fun, as we all head into the hell of May:" Elements"!

First, in Japanese.



Here is the writer of the original "Element"s song.


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