Rain garden revision for final grade due on WEDNESDAY
Did you rework some nominializations? Here we go:
- Checklist!
- Topic sentences/transitions sentences
- S-V early, let detail trail
- S-V together (the Lego Principle; something fun here, approaching the zombie approach)
- NO ITs in the document, period. Why? Practicing clarity with pronoun references.
- No there is/there are AND its is the subject position. Empty subject guide here.
- Discussion guide in class here, for some samples/elements of rain garden revision.
- Signal phrasing to make clear what information in a paragraph comes from the author-date parenthetical citation. Do not ASSUME that a parenthetical cite at the end of the paragraph covers the entire paragraph. Read this.
- According to the Biorention Manual of Prince George's county.....
- The "bible" of rain garden design is the Bioretention Manual (Prince George's Country, MD). This guide from Fairfax County, VA is a short summary of that work.....According to this summary....
- Signal phrasing can also be accomplished by the ethos presentation of Davis in the beginning of the evaluation/research reporting paragraph.
Marybeth Shea