MbShea@PWP@English@UMCP

Hello J and S and A.  Thank you for testing with me, today. NEW! Hello AW, a new tester. Start here:

First, please go to ELI and log in, with the code I emailed you.

Then, try to click into these brief ELI tutorials, from this squarespace page.  If you can access these links -- all of them -- then email to say either:

Student Introduction to Eli Review

Welcome! Eli Review encourages you to develop new routines for giving and using feedback and how to use the feedback you get to revise more effectively.This overview explains the work you’ll do in Eli Review. You can read the whole thing, or jump to a  section:

1. First Steps: sign up, learn the layout , and join a course
2. Writing tasks: turn in a draft for feedback
3. Review tasks: all about feedback
   • Give feedback to your peers
   • Make sense of feedback you received
   • Learn to be more helpful from feedback on your feedback
4. Revision tasks: where you actually improve as a writer
   • Plan your revision
   • Revise and resubmit
5. Going deeper: getting better at feedback and revision

• task ONE of ELI access and hot links to ELI via squarespace WORKS  OR DOES NOT WORK. Hello, AW, where you stop. GO to ELI student view, as I said in email, and find your custom ANGELA TASK. Do that.  THANK YOU.

Task TWO, if you have access. Then, try this brief writing task, called TEST WRITING TASK.  You will each write a short paragraph.  Complete on ELI.  I will see your response there.

Task THREE:  Review each other's paragraph in the TEST REVIEW TASK, after I put you in a review pair group. Complete on ELI. I will see your response there.

Task FOUR: TBD

You are wonderful.  THANK YOU.  Have a cookie in a perfectly disposable coffee cup.