Week 11: toward assignment 3, the one-article close review
Hello! (link under word) Do not forget that you have a Review Task (link under word) due tonight for the last collaboration on the coffee cup memo. The Work Around Cru (you know who you are) can use a google doc (link under word) to collaborate.
Here is a googe doc for you to copy/download to track your reading. Let's talk a bit about more elements of this pattern of paragraphs (PoP). BY now, you are pretty familiar with how an arrangment -- remenver, one of Aristotle's five cannons of rhetoric -- helps you see a way through a complex thinking and writing task. Down below is a PoP depicted in a flow chat in the now familiar celery green. We will also focus on the book ends of a document -- opening and closing. THe article review you will write has a shape, also, with most people writing in a lemon shape with some othes writing in a pear shape. More fun detail on these fruit shapes on Wednesday.
Articles have beginnings, middles, and ends. Think Lemon-shaped (variation is pear). Hint: how is one end of a lemon and/or a pear like the cognitive wedge? Interestingly, beginnings and ends have similarities. We have a number of options; look at these seven strategies for opening. We use these strategies with an audience in mind. Wednesday, we will talk a bit more about this audience but is based on an interdisciplinary journal club at work. Imagine Jane, all of use as colleagues, Mb as research director -- A Leaf it to Us.
Some rough thoughts about formality and audience type:
News article openings are good for the lay audience. Why? Several strategies:
- highly visual
- interesting case
- hook with tidbit of interesting information
- topic (timely)
For technical audiences, open with
- review of logos (detail of costs, population size, enormity of problem)
- controversy
- new application or breaking news
Let's look at this recent article in PloS One about writing scientific prose. In Science, two scientists talk about how they read articles. Ruben writes with a somewhat lighthearted approach while Pain responds to his piece with her approach. Read the comments.
Here is the open acess "bible" of writing (and reading) scientific prose: Mayfield. Now, let's look/review at the basic parts of the IMRAD article using this guide. BTW, this book is hosted by MIT. I follow the MIT ethical practice of teaching openly, so that knowledge is available to all and not just tuition paying students.
As promised, a flow-diagram to help you. Open in a new link.
Preview of document middle: three or four points. We will consider the cognitve magic of three. Want to read ahead? We have science on why three or found points work in communication. To prepare for that, you can skim read this Forbes piece on Thomas Jeffeson, Steven Jobs and three! If you read from a campus IP address, you have access to this widely read business magazine. If you, you likely can read under the limited-number-of-articles marketing strategy.
Wednesday!
Parking lot for turning in your coffee cup memo opened up by midday. I will link on your ELMS calendar and send link+note to you via ELMS mail. Strategic redundancy is a good way to lead a team.
I see some opportunities to remind you of polishing-up strategies. Do not lapse on these craft and critical thinking skills for life.
- Use cognitive wedge at the beginning. In some ways, you can also use a concision-aspect of the cognitive wedge in each paragraph with a
- short, simple topic sentence
- Newish idea about using a cognitive wedge shape at the end of each paragraph to slide down a smooth ramp into the next paragraph. Think also, of the lemon shape. Let your transition be short, tight (repeat a word or phrase between the linked paragraphs).
- The LCA paragraph is your decision criteria. You can say that in first person. You want to underscore the pivot from problem description into analysis.
- Citation!
- Be generous with your curated referral links throughout the paragraph. Use signal phrases to announce the worthy work of others. Help your reader "choose their own adventure" through this complexity.
- Use formal citation for the EPA LCA reference AND offer a link to help reader get there quickly if needed.
- Use formal citation for the evaluation paragraph where you are either
- Team Styro, hence offering logos of numbers from a peer reviewed Hocking paper.
- Team Paper, hence offering logos of numbers from a peer reviewed Moore paper.
- Hint: you will have likely offered an open access referral link about your frame earlier in the paper:
- Team Styro, IPPCC report on climate change with caution on PDF size
- Team Paper, a Charles Moore open access weblink to his foundational work on ocean plastic
Important reading on the difference between descriptive writing v. analysis writing. Use the links to see how I credit two other thinkers about this important difference. My example concerns rain garden knowledge, a topic you have some familiarity with now.
I will post a new Eli Review task regarding your first take on your research article. You have that article, right? And, sign, please post on Friday for this assignment. Don't make me regret my liberal use of labor grading for this course. You simply MUST BE ON TIME FOR EACH OTHER. Preview: the power of three.
Pictures for the day and do you recall the concept each is associated with yet?
Happy somewhat dreary Friday. I will be available between:
9-9:50
11-11:50
You can pick and article NOW and ask me in the sessions. I will not judge you, truly. If you look at the reading grid linked on Monday and read the prompt in Eli Review, you can still DO THIS BY FRIDAY EVENING/the Saturday Morning halo to 11AM is. Please get in there!
Here is a short video of inspiration about writing and science, as well as synthesis knowledge. Ecology and human health are both synthesis disciplines. The brain is not separate from the body. For example, microbiome studies show a connection to depression, anxiety, sensations of well being. Brain <--> gut interactons! By the way, the gut microbiome is a fascinating internal ecosystem.
Robin Wall Kimmerer is a moss and liverwort specialist -- bryophytes are primitive plants. Living fossils in our world. She is also a hero of mine. She is the last quote in my environmental science dissertation. I am concerned about agroecology and how our food systems require flourishing ecosystems to support food production. Flourishing human communities need varied, nourishing food. Kimmerer is a 2022 MacArthur Genius.
She is also an enrolled member of the Citizen Potawatami Nation.
I hope this short video encourages you in this next assignment. Writing about science is key to sharing knowledge. All human experience is enriched by knowledge generation and sharing. Why? For intellectual pleasure in know about our complex world as well as making the world better for children and other living beings.
Assignment 3 is a portal to shared knowledge in our small and temporary learning community. Let's go!
P.S. That quote? (using block indent style, so a tiny little lesson here that is similar to the block quote LCA clip from EPA in your Memo 2. Always be learning, says Mb)-->
In Braiding Sweetgrass: Indigenous Wisdom, Scientific Knowledge and the Teachings of Plants, ecologist Robin Wall Kimmerer notes:
Even a wounded world is feeding us. Even a wounded world holds us, giving us moments of wonder and joy. I choose joy over despair. Not because I have my head in the sand, but because joy is what the earth gives me daily and I must return the gift.” ― Kimmerer (2015)
Kimmerer is reflecting on the provision role of ecosytems to support human communities. She also notes the delight of living, moving, and having our being upon this earth. Her science inquiry stems from this frame.
At the end of the document, here is what is my very last citation in my 300+ bibliography-->
Kimmerer, R. W. (2015). Braiding sweetgrass. Milkweed Editions.
Note, this is too short for a hanging indent. Always be learning. Here is what one looks like for a longer paper by RWK. Recall that the hanging indent in a long bibliography helps a reader find a desired citation because the last name sits out in a "panhandle."
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