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Week 11: toward assignment 3, the one-article close review

Hello! (link under word) Do not forget that you have a Review Task (link under word) due tonight for the last collaboration on the coffee cup memo.  The Work Around Cru (you know who you are) can use a google doc (link under word) to collaborate.

Here is a googe doc for you to copy/download to track your reading.  Let's talk a bit about more elements of this pattern of paragraphs (PoP).  BY now, you are pretty familiar with how an arrangment -- remenver, one of Aristotle's five cannons of rhetoric -- helps you see a way through a complex thinking and writing task. Down below is a PoP depicted in a flow chat in the now familiar celery green. We will also focus on the book ends of a document -- opening and closing.  THe article review you will write has a shape, also, with most people writing in a lemon shape with some othes writing in a pear shape. More fun detail on these fruit shapes on Wednesday.

Articles have beginnings, middles, and ends. Think Lemon-shaped (variation is pear). Hint: how is one end of a lemon and/or a pear like the cognitive wedge?  Interestingly, beginnings and ends have similarities. We have a number of options; look at these seven strategies for opening.  We use these strategies with an audience in mind. Wednesday, we will talk a bit more about this audience but is based on an interdisciplinary journal club at work. Imagine Jane, all of use as colleagues, Mb as research director -- A Leaf it to Us.

Some rough thoughts about formality and audience type:

News article openings are good for the lay audience.  Why?  Several strategies:

  • highly visual
  • interesting case
  • hook with tidbit of interesting information
  • topic (timely)

For technical audiences, open with

  • review of logos (detail of costs, population size, enormity of problem)
  • controversy
  • new application or breaking news

Let's look at this recent article in PloS One about writing scientific prose. In Science, two scientists talk about how they read articles. Ruben writes with a somewhat lighthearted approach while Pain responds to his piece with her approach. Read the comments.

Here is the open acess "bible" of writing (and reading) scientific prose:  Mayfield. Now, let's look/review at the basic parts of the IMRAD article using this guide. BTW, this book is hosted by MIT.  I follow the MIT ethical practice of teaching openly, so that knowledge is available to all and not just tuition paying students.

As promised, a flow-diagram to help you. Open in a new link.


 

Preview of  document middle: three or four points. We will consider the cognitve magic of three. Want to read ahead?  We have science on why three or found points work in communication. To prepare for that, you can skim read this Forbes piece on Thomas Jeffeson, Steven Jobs and three! If you read from a campus IP address, you have access to this widely read business magazine. If you, you likely can read under the limited-number-of-articles marketing strategy.

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