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Catching up; topic idea generation

with AND BUT THEREFORE statements.  Let's talk about the discipline of limiting AND moves.  BUT detects difference and signals where your research question/working hypothesis is....THEREFORE is what should happen next.

Look at all the grammar and conventions noted here. For those of you continuing on in academic science, this level of revision is part of manuscript prep.

Affect/Effect.  PLEASE LISTEN or READ to Grammar Girl. She does a really nice job of cautioning you about impact, as well. For more on how this use is changing, GG used Google NGram. 

For Friday, bring your returned hard copy review documents AND A DIGITAL COPY.  By next Friday, we are turning in a document design revision.  In this activity, we will also review copyright conventions on using images.  This is how we will start:

Design constraints, to start:
THREE or FOUR PAGES in TWO-COLUMN FORMAT, without excess white space.  If you have too much white space at the end -- more than two or three lines -- email me for a fix.  You can "fool" with the formatting to achieve three pages by

  • varying font type, if needed;
  • varying font size between 11 and 14;
  • choosing the line spacing of either one-line or one and 1/2 line spacing. DO NOT USE DOUBLE SPACING FOR THIS DOCUMENT.

Images to find over the weekend. You will need approximately three graphics to work with: 

  • journal covers
  • photos of researchers
  • selected graphic from article
  • outside graphic

To Be Discussed in class. Bring these images to class along with your revised text of the review. 

For discussion, we will look at this sample THAT HAS SOME THINGS WRONG WITH IT!!!!

 

 

Posted on Wednesday, April 13, 2016 at 06:56AM by Registered CommenterMarybeth Shea | CommentsPost a Comment

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